Theme – Write on the World

If an autobiography tells the story of your whole life, a memoir zooms in on a specific piece of it. A memoir is a focused narrative built around a central theme or question, often rooted in transformation, struggle, identity, or insight. It’s not about everything that’s ever happened to you—it’s about what happened and why it matters.

Instead of telling an entire life story, a memoir zooms in on a particular “slice”—a specific period, theme, or experience that defined or transformed the author. Memoirs tend to be more literary and reflective, often prioritizing emotional truth and personal insight over comprehensive detail.

In my last blog post, we talked about how the basic steps of the novel writing process can be used to write a full autobiography. The same holds true for memoir—but with one crucial shift. With memoir, the first step isn’t structure. It’s theme. Let’s walk through how to find your theme and shape your memoir around it—one notecard at a time.

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Sophistication in Novel Writing: What It Means and How to Achieve It

December 18, 2024December 12, 2024 Mandy Webster

In the world of fiction, sophistication is one of the most admired qualities, yet it’s one of the hardest to define. A sophisticated novel doesn’t necessarily have to be literary or filled with complex language. Instead, it often means that a book has depth, subtlety, and layers that draw readers in, encouraging them to think, feel, and engage with the story on multiple levels. In this post, we’ll explore what sophistication in novel writing really means and offer actionable tips to help you add it to your own work.

Luckily, developing sophistication in your fiction writing doesn’t require that you dress the part!

Sophistication in novel writing involves creating a nuanced story with well-developed characters, an authentic voice, and a narrative that respects the reader’s intelligence. It’s about crafting a story that resonates emotionally and intellectually without needing to be flashy or overly complex. In a sophisticated novel, the layers of meaning are woven into the story itself, revealing themselves naturally as the reader progresses. Sophisticated novels often share a few core characteristics:

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The problem with inconsistent point of view | Revise and Refine

September 30, 2024September 20, 2024 Mandy Webster

Inconsistent point of view (POV) in fiction can significantly affect the reader’s experience, often in a negative way if not handled with care. For example, readers often find William Faulkner’s novel, The Sound and the Fury, difficult to read because of its inconsistency in POV. Readers are forced to actively engage with the text, filling in gaps and reconciling differing perspectives.

Inconsistent point of view in a novel can disrupt the reader’s experience of the story as well as causing reader fatigue.

While this lack of consistency isn’t necessarily “wrong” when done with purpose, it is important for the writer to consider just how hard they want their reader to have to work to understand what they have written. You must consider your intended audience: do your readers prefer to read a novel that makes them work to tease out its meaning? Or does your target audience consist of readers who want to be fully immersed in a story without having to pause regularly to think outside of the story?

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Evaluating your novel draft: The developmental edit

September 5, 2024August 28, 2024 Mandy Webster

A developmental edit is a type of editing that focuses on the big-picture elements of a novel manuscript such as its structure, plot, character development, and theme. Developmental editors help authors identify and fix problems with manuscripts such as weak plot points, underdeveloped characters, or an unclear story arc. They may also offer suggestions for improving the manuscript’s overall readability and impact.

Obtaining feedback from a professional developmental editor can help you take your novel manuscript to a whole new level! Contact me today to inquire about hiring me to provide a developmental edit of your novel draft!

Developmental editing is typically done before a manuscript is submitted to an agent or publisher. However, I like to get at least one developmental edit during the evaluation phase so I can start fixing my issues early in the writing process. The developmental edit can be a valuable service for authors who want to make sure their manuscripts are as strong as possible either way.

Here are some of the elements that a developmental editor might review in a novel manuscript:

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Writing Assignment #4: The Novel Synopsis

July 31, 2024July 24, 2024 Mandy Webster

A novel synopsis is a summary of the plot, characters, and themes of a novel. It typically provides an overview of the story without going into too much detail. A good novel synopsis should give the reader a sense of what the book is about, including the main conflict or challenge facing the characters, the setting, and any important themes or ideas explored in the story. It should be concise and engaging and should ideally make the reader want to read the book to find out more.

Aria plays the mystical instrument she discovered hidden deep within an ancient forest. Image generated using artificial intelligence.

The novel synopsis may also be used as a marketing tool to promote your book to potential readers, agents, or publishers. However, I also find it useful to write a first draft of a synopsis as part of the novel planning process.

Writing Sample

The following is a synopsis of a novel that we’ll call The Songbird’s Echo[1]which uses the Hero’s Journey story structure to move the story forward. Notice how the single sentences used in some of the previous outlines we explored have now been expanded to a couple of sentences for each section of the story’s structure. With each new assignment you complete in the planning process, you will come a little bit closer to having written your first draft!

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Story Structure: Save the Cat

July 19, 2024July 14, 2024 Mandy Webster

The Save the Cat story outline, originally a screenwriting structure developed by Blake Snyder, emphasizes the importance of creating a likable protagonist who goes through a series of ups and downs before ultimately achieving their goal.