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“Once is Usually Enough” | Avoiding Redundancy in Fiction Writing

Mandy Webster

In Self-Editing for Fiction Writers, Renni Browne and Dave King emphasize the importance of conciseness with the principle, “Once is Usually Enough.” This idea reminds writers to avoid unnecessary repetition and redundancy that can bog down prose, dilute impact, and test readers’ patience. Instead of overexplaining or reiterating points, Browne and King suggest that writers trust readers to pick up on cues, encouraging clarity and efficiency in storytelling. Let’s explore what this approach means and how it can elevate your writing.

Unlike in art where repeating shapes can create interest, redundancy in narrative writing can do the opposite.

At its core, “Once is Usually Enough” is about respect for the reader’s intelligence and the strength of your storytelling. Browne and King remind us that redundancy—whether it’s repeated words, concepts, or explanations—can slow down the narrative and weaken the reader’s engagement. Readers don’t need every detail restated, and when a writer repeats information unnecessarily, it can feel like “telling” rather than “showing.” Reducing repetition sharpens your story, giving every line and detail a specific purpose.

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“Breaking Up is Easy to Do”: Creating Flow in Fiction with Paragraph and Scene Breaks

Mandy Webster

In their practical and insightful book, Self-Editing for Fiction Writers, Renni Browne and Dave King explore techniques that make fiction writing cleaner, clearer, and more engaging. In the chapter titled “Breaking Up is Easy to Do,” they emphasize the importance of effectively breaking up paragraphs, sentences, and scenes to improve pacing and readability. This approach, they argue, is about giving readers space to breathe, shifting focus where needed, and making complex narratives feel seamless. Let’s unpack this technique and see how it can help you build a more dynamic and reader-friendly story.

Breaking up is easy — in prose!

When Browne and King talk about “breaking up,” they refer to structuring prose in a way that maximizes clarity, flow, and impact. Often, beginning writers try to cram too much information into long paragraphs, which can overwhelm readers. Overly dense text, filled with action, introspection, and description, makes it difficult for readers to stay engaged and process what’s happening. Strategic paragraph and scene breaks, on the other hand, act as “mini-pauses,” allowing readers to absorb key moments without becoming fatigued. Here are a few reasons why breaking up your prose is essential:

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“See How It Sounds” | The Power of Reading Your Writing Aloud

Mandy Webster

In the craft of fiction writing, the written word isn’t just meant to be read with the eyes—it’s also meant to be heard, experienced through its rhythm and flow. This is where the concept of “see how it sounds” comes in, as highlighted by Renni Browne and Dave King in their classic book, Self-Editing for Fiction Writers. When the authors recommend this technique, they’re talking about the transformative power of reading your work out loud, a method that can reveal issues and enhance the polish of your prose in ways silent reading might miss.

Read your work aloud to “see how it sounds!”

The phrase “see how it sounds” essentially means that a writer should read their work aloud to experience the natural flow, rhythm, and tone of their words. Browne and King suggest this approach because hearing your prose can bring out flaws that are easy to overlook on the page, such as awkward phrasing, unnatural dialogue, or monotonous sentence structures. By vocalizing your text, you gain a new perspective that engages not just your visual processing but also your auditory senses.

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Book review: Self-Editing for Fiction Writers by Renni Browne and Dave King

Mandy Webster

Self-Editing for Fiction Writers by Renni Browne and Dave King is one of my favorite writing manuals that I often recommend to writers during the revise and refine stage of the novel writing process. It is a popular guide among authors that focuses on practical techniques to improve the quality of a manuscript during the revision process.

In Self-Editing for Fiction Writers, the authors teach you how to apply the editing techniques they have developed to your own work. 

Here are some of the main concepts covered in this writing manual:

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