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Using the M.I.C.E. Quotient to evaluate your novel draft

Mandy Webster

The M.I.C.E. Quotient is a method of categorizing stories based on the four core narrative elements of Milieu, Idea, Character, and Event. This method was developed by science fiction writer Orson Scott Card and is used by many writers and editors to help identify and refine the central focus of a story.

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The M.I.C.E. Quotient is an excellent place to start when evaluating the focal point of a novel manuscript. It helps the writer determine whether the first draft concentrates on the appropriate element or elements that will most effectively achieve their creative vision. The following is a breakdown of each element:

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The importance of letting your novel draft rest

Mandy Webster

Once you’ve completed an initial evaluation of your manuscript, it’s time to set it on a back burner for a while and let it simmer. Taking a break after writing and completing an initial review of your novel draft is crucial for several reasons. First, it gives you the opportunity to gain a fresh perspective on your work. When you’ve been working on a manuscript for a long time, it can be challenging to see it objectively.

Like a complex and hearty soup, your novel draft may get better the longer you let it simmer on a back burner!

Taking a break allows you to come back to the manuscript with fresh eyes, making it easier to spot areas that need improvement. This can also increase your objectivity when evaluating your own work. During the drafting process, you’re likely to become attached to certain ideas or phrases. Taking a break can help you become more objective about your work, allowing you to make changes that improve the story without getting bogged down by your initial attachment to certain ideas.

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The third step in the novel writing process: Evaluation

Mandy Webster

Now that you have written your novel draft, the next step in the novel writing process is to evaluate what you have written. What did you do well, and what needs improvement? It’s important to note that while writing quickly can be beneficial during the first draft, the subsequent revision and editing stages are equally crucial for refining and polishing your novel. Once you have allowed your first draft a few days (sometimes even weeks or months) to cool, it’s time to come back to it and evaluate what you’ve written.

In this series, we’ve reviewed the planning and writing steps of the novel writing process. Now it’s time to evaluate that first draft you wrote!

I recommend that you begin by reading straight through the draft, taking notes as you go. There’s no need to fix anything right now. Just make a quick note and then keep reading. Don’t even worry about spelling, grammar, or punctuation yet. There’s no point proofreading when there is still writing to do. When it comes to evaluating your first draft, here are some things to look for on the first read-through:

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Novel drafting rule #4: No editing allowed

Mandy Webster

Writing and editing involve different cognitive processes that use different parts of the brain. When you write, you typically use your creative and imaginative processes, which are associated with the right side of the brain. This involves generating new ideas, making connections between concepts, and visualizing scenes and characters.

Writing a novel can be like putting a puzzle together without knowing what the final product is supposed to look like. Image generated using artificial intelligence.

On the other hand, editing involves a more analytical and critical thinking process, which is associated with the left side of the brain. This involves evaluating the structure, pacing, and clarity of your writing, checking for errors in grammar and punctuation, and refining your prose to make it more effective and engaging. Editing your work during the drafting stage of the novel writing process can be counterproductive for a few reasons:

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Novel drafting rule #1: Write the first chapter of your novel last

Mandy Webster

Hopefully, your novel will have lots of “best parts,” but one of the most important parts of your novel will be the first chapter (also referred to as the “introduction” when discussing the basic steps of the writing process.) One of the most efficient and effective ways to write a five-paragraph essay is to write your three body paragraphs first and then write the introduction and conclusion paragraphs last. The same is often true when writing a novel.

It’s okay if your novel chapters don’t fit perfectly together in the first draft! Image generated using artificial intelligence.

The first chapter of a novel plays a crucial role in capturing the reader’s attention, introducing key elements of the story, and setting the stage for the narrative to come. It is the author’s opportunity to make a strong first impression and entice readers to delve further into the book. However, the author—you—often doesn’t know what the key elements of the story will be until after the majority of the first draft has been written. How can you possibly introduce those elements in your first chapter when you don’t know yet what they are?

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“First drafts are shit” and other writing advice from the experts

Mandy Webster

I can tell you from years of experience with drafting novels that first drafts always suck. Don’t believe me? Read what the following authors have to say about writing the first draft of a novel:

The point of the first draft is not to write a good story. The point is to get the story out of your head and onto the page. You can worry about making it “good” later. Image generated by artificial intelligence.
  • “Almost all good writing begins with terrible first efforts.” – Anne Lamott
  • “The first draft is just you telling yourself the story.” – Terry Pratchett
  • “The first draft is nothing more than a starting point, so be wrong, break the rules, and start over as many times as you need.” – Jonathan Franzen”
  • The first draft of everything is terrible. Don’t worry, it’s meant to be.” – Chloe Benjamin”
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Step two of the novel writing process: The first draft (and Writing Assignment #6)

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During the last few weeks, we’ve spent a lot of time on the planning stage of the novel writing process, and for good reason. Taking the time to develop a well-planned story will make writing the first draft of your novel seem like a stroll through the garden. When it comes to the drafting stage of the novel writing process, the most important piece of advice I can give you is to just start writing and don’t stop until it’s done.

The time has come to embark on the next leg of your novel writing journey! Image generated using artificial intelligence.

However, you’d probably like a bit more advice than that, so here are some helpful hints and tips to get you through this stage of the novel writing process:

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Writing Assignment #3: Outline your novel! 

Mandy Webster

If you’ve been following my blog the past couple of weeks, you’ve probably learned a lot about novel structure and how to outline an idea as part of the planning stage of the novel writing process. You may be wondering, what now, brown cow? Well, I hope you have a lot of notes and ideas at the ready because it is finally time to outline your novel!

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By now, I hope you have settled on one or a couple of story structure outlines that will meet the needs of your novel or novels. I say, “or novels” because at this point, you may still have a couple of ideas that you are hashing out. While you may be tempted to narrow your focus to just one at this point, I say keep working on all those ideas for now, at least until a clear forerunner emerges. Just make sure you settle on one novel to draft at a time. Right now, you still have plenty of time to consider which novel you want to write first. For now, let’s jump into our next writing assignment.

Writing Assignment #3: Outline your novel

Outlining a novel is a personal process, and there is no one “right” way to do it. However, here are some general steps you can take to outline your novel:

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