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Does the first chapter of your novel make promises it can’t keep?

Chapter One: it’s where every story begins. It sets the reader’s expectations of what they are about to read and often makes promises that it must keep in order to satisfy the reader. It’s a big job, and not every chapter is cut out to do it. It’s common in the revise and refine stage of the novel writing process to realize that the chapter you thought would come first just isn’t ready to do all that heavy lifting. You might evaluate your novel manuscript and find yourself asking, “Where does this story actually begin?” Does your story begin with your current chapter one? Or do you need to write a whole new first chapter?

Be very careful of breaking your chapter one promises if you don’t want to break the hearts of these creepy A.I. twins!

The first chapter of a novel makes a number of promises to its readers, setting up expectations for the rest of the story. These promises may include:

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How to request constructive feedback on your novel manuscript

Obtaining feedback on your manuscript during the evaluation step of the writing process shouldn’t be the same experience as getting your mom’s proud stamp of approval on your published novel. The last thing any writer needs or wants at this stage of the writing process is for anyone to stroke your ego and tell you how awesome you are. During the evaluation stage, it’s important to seek out targeted feedback that will help you improve your writing.

The best writing feedback is constructive. It helps you determine how to make your novel draft better rather than falsely convincing you that your writing is perfect!

While it may be nice to hear that you are doing a great job, it’s not particularly helpful when what you really want is constructive criticism. Here are some tips for getting productive feedback on your writing:

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